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The VIllage season 2 scene 10 + 3

 
Author CMjohnnyB
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#1 - Posted: 15 Jun 2008 12:06
A day in the life of the village called table 1
Season 2 scene 10 + 3

The places events and characters portrayed in this work are purely fictional any resemblance to people living or dead are purely intentional.

New Characters

Thehype – an individual of approximately 32 years of age with a pleasant personality and a warmth that reaches out to greet people, has a good sense of humour joined the village some months ago to join in the Saturday night poker games

Scene 10 + 3 begins
The scene opens in a dark place so dark that the absence of light is normal and the oppression of dark is the norm a place so dark that even the brightest sun could not penetrate a place so dark that (Oh! I am sure that you've got the idea by now its bloody dark)
Erhum! Excuse me narrator says drwho but are you certain your starting this scene in the right place
Yes! I (the narrator) am sure thank you
But says drwho you left the 4 and their group in the corridor with torches didn't you
Yes I (the narrator) did
And you left HappyAli, Krazy1, Shelbri and their group in a room with lights didn't you
YES I (the narrator) DID and I'll ask you to keep within your own timeline phase please drwho
OKIE! DOKIELY says drwho I'll mind my own business, I was just wondering why are you starting in a dark place???
If I (the narrator) may continue (oh! I'm all of a dither now)
I (the narrator) need to rest to recover my composure, Just talk amongst yourselves for a bit please
If I started there for that one and there for that one then this one should be Humph Erhum!
Right as I (the narrator) was saying
The scene opens in a room full of light
Snigger I was right says drwho
In the room is happyAli, Krazy1, Shellbri, yschi, baby, jojomacca, z1zu and the 3 missing film stars George, Tom and Ben.
The ten of them are in various poses and contortions with intertwining limbs and bodies, gasping for breath red faced tussled hair and a glow of sheer delight as they play twister.
Standing opposite them is drwho who has several 35mm cameras and 2 DVD recorder cameras.
That's good hold it right there says drwho oh I'm enjoying this I'm getting some great shots for my portfolio do any of you fancy playing nude twister.
I could get big money for a DVD of you playing nude twister says drwho
No thank you dr say the group in unison (nope won't)
Oh ok says dr I can still get a good price for these stills and the DVD
Do you do photography as a profession dr says baby
Oh! no strictly amateur says dr wait a minute shh! he continues whilst walking to the door
I thought I heard something the group playing twister stop and join dr at the door listening
I have got peculiar feeling says dr here happyAli take this (he passes happyAli a piece of metal) and don't lose it or give it to anyone
Fanks dr says happyAli wot is it then
It's a time key says dr look after it you will know when and how to use it when the time comes.
happyAli says fanks again dr as she hides the time key in a place where only she should now about.

Scene switches to

Scene opens in a long corridor where walks the four and the group with them torchlight illuminates the corridor and the group sees in front of them a junction of 9 corridors
This is the way we came in from the cave says CW
And this is the way back to the village says bobby
That leaves 7 corridors then says Beverly
Do we split up and search them all at once says Denisey
Crikey no says hovis that's tantamount to suicide
Oh! mummy says MOD_twr506
Then we search them as a group banking on safety in numbers continues Denisey
Ok then lets pick a direction says bobby
This way says CW pointing to the third corridor on his left
But says Denisey the noises we heard the other day came from this direction pointing to the second corridor to their right
Ok then says CW we go that way
The group move off with MOD_twr506 in the rear which is where people in stories like this usually disappear I (the narrator) know these things
Oh mummy says MOD_twr506 pushing his way into the middle of the group
The group come to a door and listen carefully
I'm sure I can hear something in there says bobby
Yes I do to says hovis
Ok after you then CW says Beverly
Why me says CW why me
Because you are the police and have the authority says twr506
Yes but you're the village Elders and have authority too says CW
Oh for goodness sake says flojo opening the door and walking inside
Hello where did you come from says thehype
Did you just walk through a wall says 1superken
Hype, Ken says bobby and CW together what are you doing here
Could ask you the same question says hype we are in que waiting for table 1
But I think there is a glitch says Ken as we've been waiting for a long time
So what are you doing says ken and hype in unison (no can't make me)
The group explain and ken and hype decide to join them as they make their way down another corridor when they come to another door this time the size of the group and no previous nasty surprises makes the group less cautious and they open the door and rush in
The group stand there speechless looking on as dr, happyAli, Krazy1, Shellbri, bvaby, z1zu, yschi, jojomacca look back at them

and in the background can be seen
George, Tom and Ben standing there sobbing and muttering not again please not again


Scene 10 + 3 Ends
Scene 10 + 4 will be published on Monday 16th June

Scene 10 + 5 will be published on Friday 20th June unless I get requests for an early publication when it will be Tuesday 17th June
Author krazy1
Forums Member
#2 - Posted: 15 Jun 2008 14:35
ohhhhhh johnny luv it please dont keep me waiting i wanna hear the rest
Author denisey
Forums Member
#3 - Posted: 15 Jun 2008 14:45
getting excited now johnny lol
Author krazy1zbaby
Forums Member
#4 - Posted: 15 Jun 2008 18:03
good job...

i love it.
Author 1superken
Forums Member
#5 - Posted: 15 Jun 2008 18:07
A nice read johnny as always
Author Bobbybuttmunch
Forums Member
#6 - Posted: 23 Jun 2008 13:50
He he he.

I know i'm late but i'm getting there!!!!
Author petey7
Forums Member
#7 - Posted: 23 Jun 2008 21:00
petey was here
 
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